Thursday, November 18, 2010

2 Voice Poem


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=89CcRXr0GBY


We could see the conflicts between Odysseus and Poseidon. Poseidon is cursing Odysseus as far as he can for killing his dear son, Cyclopes. I tried to show the conflict between them, who is feeling different even though they are in the same situation.

Odysseus

Poseidon


a strange island filled with rocks

the War is over but the storms drives us to a

map-less island



regret

the giant, I regret giving him

wine

A gift of thankfulness by eating us all up?

many of my people

devoured by Cyclopes



Guzzling


Gobbling


Gulping


Gorging


sneaky

wondering how to

find a way to save myself and all my sailors

We want to go home





A sharp burning stick , cunning words


stabbing his one eye with a burning stick

Blinding him


The screams, the painful howls




Blind

victory!

surely we can go


home


a strange island filled with rocks




map-less island

If they harm my son I will make them regret arriving on that island

regret





my son allowed strangers to enter his ...gloomy cave!

many of those people


many of those people

are nothing but



robbers


raiders


ransackers


ravagers


sneaky

wondering how to



punish the vermin

That crafty Odysseus


A sharp burning stick , cunning words treachery, ingratitude, blinding my son



Oh my son

The screams, the painful howls

wake me from my ocean deep sleep



Blind

Victory


they shall never reach

home

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